I screamed for validation on your heart,
bleeding softly in my hands,
to the wavering October air.
You saw me when I was floating
in an upside down balloon,
watching you with curious eyes.
You caught me,
before I drifted away.
And I let you die;
let you bleed on the now
yellowing blades of grass
below our bodies.
Will you forgive me
for not loving you?
bleeding softly in my hands,
to the wavering October air.
You saw me when I was floating
in an upside down balloon,
watching you with curious eyes.
You caught me,
before I drifted away.
And I let you die;
let you bleed on the now
yellowing blades of grass
below our bodies.
Will you forgive me
for not loving you?
8 Comments:
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I'm loving this poem, absolutely loving it. And if you change this to registered users only, I shall lose my ability to comment and become sad!
Mike
*sigh* do you have any idea how many of these websites and blogger domains I'm already signed up for? But yes, I could definately do that.
Haha. You guys are awesome. Anyway, I shall wait and see if I get anymore awful spam until I switch it to registered users and I will most definitely let you know Mike. :) Thanks for all the wonderful comment-ness.
thanks very much for your nice comment and i'm glad you are able to clean out all that other excess comment junk.
i likes this poem and if you put mine in a jar i will put this one in a vault....so now who's trembling in fear?? hmm?? haha.
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wow that judas guy is creepy
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