Thursday, September 08, 2005

I screamed for validation on your heart,
bleeding softly in my hands,
to the wavering October air.

You saw me when I was floating
in an upside down balloon,
watching you with curious eyes.
You caught me,
before I drifted away.

And I let you die;
let you bleed on the now
yellowing blades of grass
below our bodies.

Will you forgive me
for not loving you?

8 Comments:

Blogger Unknown said...

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7:33 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I'm loving this poem, absolutely loving it. And if you change this to registered users only, I shall lose my ability to comment and become sad!

Mike

8:24 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

*sigh* do you have any idea how many of these websites and blogger domains I'm already signed up for? But yes, I could definately do that.

3:11 PM  
Blogger Stephanie said...

Haha. You guys are awesome. Anyway, I shall wait and see if I get anymore awful spam until I switch it to registered users and I will most definitely let you know Mike. :) Thanks for all the wonderful comment-ness.

5:08 PM  
Blogger eyes of a tragedy said...

thanks very much for your nice comment and i'm glad you are able to clean out all that other excess comment junk.
i likes this poem and if you put mine in a jar i will put this one in a vault....so now who's trembling in fear?? hmm?? haha.

2:40 PM  
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6:14 PM  
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4:28 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

wow that judas guy is creepy

8:26 PM  

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