Monday, June 27, 2005

The Rebuttal (x2)

(Written by Elly and I. A rebuttal to "The Emotional Screen" seen on http://desperateforyourattention.blogspot.com/)

Dearest Rose that plagues your heart with its soft sweet scent and gentle petals, calling out to you.

Visit us, the thousand roses that grow on thickest vines wrapped around a wall of deceit.

A wall of a thousand lies, painted with the color of despair, and monochromatic shades of lost love.

Nothing can define your love.

Swords sharpen rose petals until they are wilted.

Are you wilted, inside your cell?

We, who will not sit idly by and wait for heart ache to break the plausible wall that redefines our world...we will find strength in breaking barriers.

Resist allowing the icy grip of ease destroy your beauty.

It will swallow your pride, and wring the life from your once freewheeling soul. Spurn the creature feeding on your generous love, and find your way back to cobblestone paths and rainbow roads.

We will be waiting with bricks in our hands, from long days tearing down the wall to your soul, now adding them to your path.

The path that holds new beginnings, and adventures.

You can breathe, now that you're alive.

We are the stars that guide your road.

Bringing you closer to the forgotten treasure of our universe.

Roses aren’t so beautiful that have thorns.

Roses which take revenge upon our open hearts.

Feeding on our love, meant to be shared with those whom ignore it.

It is they that bear the thorns.

That torment us behind our screens.

And us, with swords in hand that strike the lovely roses dead.

And so dear, when chance next brings you to this place, forget what you have last seen.

The wall forgotten, the roses strewn.

Across the never-ending plain of our love for you

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