An Excerpt
From a story I am working on...
Colors turned into shapes in my mind and suddenly I was flying high up in the air, except the air wasn’t air, it was marshmallow clouds suspended in blueberry gelatin. I was a spectator to the greatest flying circus in the world. I was watching plastic airplanes made out of puffs of smoke fly through my world. It was amazing and breathtaking. I swear I could’ve taken my heart right out of my stomach and squeezed the juice from it into a jar, and all I would label that jar would be ‘happiness.’ At that moment, that was what I was; happy. Later I would realize that my happiness had been fueled by systematic trips.
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I never knew there was so much good writing on the internet till I started a blog. I read one of your poems and enjoyed it. Found your blog through Rinaku. I started a blog http://sunrisesunsett.blogspot.com/to talk about bringing up my kids and then I found blogging so wonderful that I haven't stopped since my first post in Jan this year. Then I started my current blog. I have a total of two regular visitors to date but they have really kept me going. Cheers!
Hey, thanks for commenting back on my blog. For the b'day wish as well.:) I like the way you express things in words. I do think that your poems are cool. I've bookmarked your blog, so I think I shall visit here more.
Anyway, this blogging network is just great, isn't it? It makes us connect ourselves to more people each day. Glad to see you here, Aquarius!
hey hun. please don't feel bad, like i felt bad that you felt bad so i hope you don't.
and thanks for not believing that stuff about me, you really are sweet.
also, i really love this bit of the story you posted, you write so wonderfully descriptively and i'm sure you can become a great writer, i mean you already are.
either way take care and now i can tease you about how my school is almost done, haha.
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